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E. H. Lau's avatar

Lovely story!

I really enjoyed the bit of magic realism, where the snow angel is left unexplained for the narrator (and the narrator's Nana) to find meaning in it themselves. ☺️

Oh, and congrats on having it featured on Top in Fiction! 😄

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Diana Hannay's avatar

Thank you my friend! TiF is such a wonderful community of truly talented writers. I feel blessed (and still in disbelief) to count myself among them.

It makes me so happy you picked up on the touch of magic realism! I wanted to lean into how the holiday season often makes many feel - where ordinary moments can take on an almost otherworldly wonder - without crossing into actual fantasy.

Thank you so much for reading!

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Daniel O’Donnell's avatar

Hi Diana, I didn’t get a chance to comment directly when I was reading all the stories for Top in Fiction, but I just wanted to say that I thought this story was lovely with great characters that I was really invested in and a setting that brought to life all the magic that children feel at this time of year. Brilliantly done 👍🏼

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Diana Hannay's avatar

Thank you so much for your kind words. It means a lot coming from a fellow writer! I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. 🙏

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Matt Gerrity's avatar

What a lovely story! I loved the vivid setting and Katy's feeling of wonder. Wonderfully written!

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Diana Hannay's avatar

Thank you so much for your kinds words, Matt! I appreciate you stopping by to read Katydid and am so happy you enjoyed the story. Happy holidays!

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